Open the door
I killed someone
it-it was an accident
we were talking and then it happened
she said “goodbye” likes she saw it coming
but I didn’t!
Open the door
they’re looking for me
they’re asking how could I be so cruel
but they don’t know how it happened!
I was upset but I didn’t mean to hurt her
it was all self defense!
Open de door!
I think I’m on the news
you’re the only one who can listen without judging me
Why aren’t you opening the door?
please, I need to see you
por favor
I’m gonna count to three and kick it
one, two, three
one, two, three
ONE, TWO, THREE
...
Of course… you couldn’t open it becuase the person that I killed… was you
I killed your former self with my words and my actions
I said that I was defending myself but I was not,
I hope you can forgive me,
because I never will
“You’re my best friend
now I’ve got no one to tell
how I lost my bestfriend”
- Mitski, “The frost”
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Autor:
Noemi Silva (Seudónimo) (
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- Comentario del autor sobre el poema: De mi nuevo libro "Azul Verdadero". Lamento si la calidad es más baja esta vez, ya no tengo editor así que por eso los poemas ya no están tan pulidos. Siéntanse en libertad de poner su versión editada de este poema en los comentarios! También díganme si les gustaría una versión completa en español. ¡Nos leemos pronto!
- Categoría: Amistad
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